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Poem To My G/f

#1 ${lang:macro__useroffline}$ Minerdamian

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Post icon Posted 21 February 2003 - 04:51 AM

As I woke up this morning, I felt so cold and all alone. I wondered through my day, and knew all hope was gone. I took out a letter, written right from your heart. Began to read your words, but couldn't get past the start. My eyes were filled with tears, and they fell like April showers. Our love felt so good to me, and I feel so distant again. Please tell me what I did so wrong, I know I can make it right. Even if it hurts to tell me, I know you'll show me the light. My love for you will always be there, my heart forever true. I wanted to share so much with you, but now the end is due. Something happened so out of control that turn your love to fear. The beautiful memories of our love will always keep me near. As I close my eyes, and think of our love, I know my feelings were true. Now as I go to sleep tonight, my dreams are filled with memories of you. Tommorow I'll wake just wanting to be with you.

My heart goes out to anyone who has been broken hearted.. I feel for you

#2 ${lang:macro__useroffline}$ X Zolon

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Posted 21 February 2003 - 07:16 AM

wow.. its beautiful.. im acctually crying here! your very talented!

#3 ${lang:macro__useroffline}$ Briannia

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Posted 21 February 2003 - 07:28 AM

You're very talented Minerdamian. I think that's a great poem.

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Posted 21 February 2003 - 07:34 AM

hmm, i wish i could do poetry as good as you.

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Posted 21 February 2003 - 11:58 AM

great poem minerdamian! I was just about crying reading it

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Posted 21 February 2003 - 04:16 PM

lol... nice

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Posted 21 February 2003 - 04:28 PM

You have talent with poetry.

I think Cspace was thinking about having a poetry section since several seeDs have been putting up poems on the forums.

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Posted 22 February 2003 - 12:52 AM

Hey,

For the poetry guru I am, your poem is nice. Although if it were I, I would have augmented your diction and figurative language, possiblity thrown in some syndroches and metonymy, and also put it into stanzas

. Good job, buddy.

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#9 ${lang:macro__useroffline}$ Adoration

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Posted 22 February 2003 - 04:23 AM

Whatever Phil was talking about...

Les, this sounds like a far cry from where you and Stephanie were a few days ago, hun. If you wanna talk about relationships, I have been there--have I *ever*! *lol*

Just holla at me whenever you need to chat.

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Posted 18 January 2007 - 02:42 AM

nicely put
that shows a lot of talent

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