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#1 {lang:macro__useroffline}   Kimojuno {lang:icon}

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Posted 06 January 2008 - 11:30 PM

As many of you may know, I enjoy writing poetry, and I have recently written a poem that won silver in a contest. If you want to, check it out. grnwink.gif

{lang:macro__view_post}Xmadole, on 09 August 2009 - 09:28 AM, said:

i wish i actually read the first post of threads.


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Posted 07 January 2008 - 03:38 AM

Grats on the silver! I'm not into poetry, though. bluetongue.gif
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Posted 07 January 2008 - 05:43 AM

It's hard not to make a poem a dramatic bleeding heart...but you did a pretty good job of laying it on short and sweet. The last thing I want in poems is a long, drawn out, gushy mushy poem.

It's also important to consider the fact that your poem had a role in modern-day debate. That probably got you an extra edge. grnwink.gif

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Posted 07 January 2008 - 09:15 AM

I perfer simpler poems. bluetongue.gif I did like it though. thumb.gif

ARGH! You just got that god damn song stuck in my head again. >.>

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Posted 07 January 2008 - 09:05 PM

I didn't like it at the beginning, but as I read to the end, I really liked it. Very well done!
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Posted 07 January 2008 - 09:21 PM

QUOTE(Neraphym @ Jan 6 2008, 10:38 PM) {lang:macro__view_post}
Grats on the silver! I'm not into poetry, though. bluetongue.gif


Lol, thanks! biglaugh.gif

QUOTE(Ruckus Fox @ Jan 7 2008, 12:43 AM) {lang:macro__view_post}
It's hard not to make a poem a dramatic bleeding heart...but you did a pretty good job of laying it on short and sweet. The last thing I want in poems is a long, drawn out, gushy mushy poem.

It's also important to consider the fact that your poem had a role in modern-day debate. That probably got you an extra edge. grnwink.gif

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True enough, I enjoy making people think. *that* in itself is the goal I have when I create poetry, or more so poetry creates me. grnwink.gif

QUOTE(Xmadole @ Jan 7 2008, 04:15 AM) {lang:macro__view_post}
I perfer simpler poems. bluetongue.gif I did like it though. thumb.gif


Lol, again, thanks. bluetongue.gif

QUOTE(Xmadole @ Jan 7 2008, 04:15 AM) {lang:macro__view_post}
ARGH! You just got that god damn song stuck in my head again. >.>

(8)I shott thee sherrifff, but I didd not shoot the deputy!(8) xDxDxD


Wasn't my intention. bluetongue.gif

QUOTE(Aarоn @ Jan 7 2008, 04:05 PM) {lang:macro__view_post}
I didn't like it at the beginning, but as I read to the end, I really liked it. Very well done!


Cool, sweet, and thanks. grnwink.gif

{lang:macro__view_post}Xmadole, on 09 August 2009 - 09:28 AM, said:

i wish i actually read the first post of threads.


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