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"Hues"--A sonnet by Mathias Dosch

#1 User is offline   Ruckus Fox Icon

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 07:08 PM

Well, I had to write a sonnet for school work. Bloody idiotic assignments... so I figured I'd do one that's relative to me. Some people may not know, but I have two different colored eyes. It's not very drastic. At a distance they both look green, but in reality the left one is blue and the right one is yellow. Both have speckles of the opposite color near the pupil, but for the most part they're both different. Because they're classified as "hazel" they change with what I'm wearing. If I wear yellow or blue, you can REALLY notice that they're different.

I'm not sure if I like it or not. Joey, my last boyfriend, loved it. He was obsessed over it. Yet some other friends of mine find it rather...odd. Kinda scary too. I'll let you be the judge. Here's my sonnet. Recall that sonnets are specific. 14 lines. I forget what type this is...but the style is abab bcbc cdcd ee. Recall it.

"Hues" by Mathias Dosch

“Hues”
I have two eyes to view the world
One looks forward and one looks back
Both see as they are; unclouded; unfurled
They see in color, not sepia, chrome, or black

The left is cerulean, no cyan-blue hack
It’s made for cuter, more innocent times
The right is a golden hue, no vision does it lack
This made for darker, more sinister crimes

Though colors they may be, properties they mime
None can fathom their joy and their pain
Memories locked away, suffered by time
To conjure them up would surely be vain

Though different shades, no one sheds sorrow
Enjoy the time given, ‘lest you must borrow


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Posted 18 April 2009 - 10:24 PM

I like it. biglaugh.gif

View PostXmadole, on 09 August 2009 - 09:28 AM, said:

i wish i actually read the first post of threads.


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Posted 19 April 2009 - 06:26 PM

Fancy.
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Posted 20 April 2009 - 02:58 AM

This isn't an old topic or anything... *cough*

'Tis a good poem, Ruckus =D Better than anything I could do. >.>;







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