[Darkness]

Hmmmm.... I'm currently writing a book. Do to my bad case of procrastination though it probably won't live. But anyways:

The Fire of Knowledge

Prologue

Darkness… All around me… My friends…. I hurt them…. I betrayed them… The memory… Can’t forget… It will haunt me for the rest of my life.

We encountered an enemy we could not defeat. We tried, but in the end, our enemy covered the world in darkness. Now, my friends have been destroyed. I soon will be, too.

I am called Matthew, Matthew Larson; and you may call me that as well. I am about to be destroyed, and nobody will know my tale. But through these, my final words, hopefully they will know. In these pages I will tell of my triumphs and shames, wins and losses that have been my journey. But I must begin somewhere… I suppose this story begins with an end. But now it is time to look back at what is done.

This post has been edited by Darkness: 17 March 2005 - 03:20 AM

[CongressJon]

Nice start Conscience! I must say, you sure did a good job! *Grumbles about writing the whole damn thing...* One other thing:

In these pages I will tell of my triumphs and shames, wins and losses that has been my journey.

Gramatical error.

[Darkness]

Oh, stop it with the grammar. And I gave you credit on The Archives, but I forgot to here.

[Ruckus Fox]

It's nice. a little gloomy in the beginning...But..Eh. *shrugs* Matthew is becomming a common name for books, it seems.

From a writer to a writer, once you start getting ahead more, you'll look back at the beginning and say. "My god...that SUCKS!" (Just because you will have gotten so much better) And you'll say, "I need to revise it." And hopefully you'll be less lazy than me

Good luck with it. I always enjoy reading and giving helpful criticism. Remember that no matter how good of a writer you are, you show your bests by accepting constructive criticism.

---Ruckus the Rogue

[Darkness]

Uhhh, Matthew is my middle name, and I've always liked it better than my first, so thats usually a main character in all of my books.