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My song This is creepy..

#1 {lang:macro__useroffline}   Mobster101 {lang:icon}

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Posted 07 May 2005 - 11:57 PM

Note: this song is creepy but toatally fictional.

QUOTE(Why must you?)

Why must you?
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Mobster101 



[First part] [{Sung lightly} 
I came home, just the other day. Only to find you and with him you laid.
I didn’t know what to do, after all, I was in love with you.

[chorus] {Sung rock and roll style} why must you?? Constantly?  You always disprove your love for me. Just when I think we could be, you just come and stab me. {hard rock guitar solo} In the back, and in my side, But you never made sure I died! [chorus]


[second part] {Sung lightly} Now it’s over. The funeral done, and there he lies. The dead one!  {heavy rock style} With the knife that you stabbed me. I took his life, with no dignity.  He’s not here, to defend you. What will you say? For what you did do. I just wish, It could have gone differently. But it’s over and it’s just you and me.


[CHORUS HERE] 

{sung creepily} if I can’t have you, no one will…And If I can’t love you, no one will. So take the knife again in your hand and give me a reason to do it again.
Just one more night, and maybe things wouldn’t be this way. But it’s to late, this it today. I am sorry, for what I did. But now it’s over, the funeral done…and there he lays, the dead one! 

[CHORUS HERE]

{sung in memory} Why did you? Do the things you did? Because here you lay..at my feet..DEAD!

Again totally fiction but I wrote it as a creepy gothic rock song.
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#2 {lang:macro__useroffline}   BubbaMurphy {lang:icon}

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Posted 08 May 2005 - 12:08 AM

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Posted 08 May 2005 - 05:10 PM

thx bubba!
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Posted 08 May 2005 - 05:27 PM

THATS FRIKKEN AWESOME.
If you just kinda make up a tune and sing it.... wow.

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WOOT

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Posted 08 May 2005 - 05:31 PM

OMG! you actually like it X?
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