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Poem I was feelin down and made this...

#1 {lang:macro__useroffline}   Lprince {lang:icon}

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Posted 22 January 2007 - 07:37 PM

Why when you love someone and you're love is returned,
And attraction and interests and friendships are shared,
Why cant this bond be made visible to all?
With a hug and a kiss to cheer you both up,
And a hand in you're hand to say to the world;
'Look at me and my love, together at last'
If you strike me down, I shall become more powerful than you can possibly imagine.
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Posted 23 January 2007 - 01:59 AM

I like that. A fair deal, actually. Good job.
Overwhelmed as one would be, placed in my position.
Such a heavy burden now to be "The One".
Born to bear and read to all the details of our ending
To write it down for all the world to see.
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Posted 04 April 2007 - 11:59 PM

Thanks!

Just rantings of someone who cant be botherd learning about oxymorons, but Im glad its apreciated TheSmile.gif
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Posted 05 April 2007 - 02:47 AM

I think I can appreciate it because of the situations I've been in and experienced. Which is what usually happens to people when they read things like that. It either reminds them of things they've gone through and makes them appreciate it.

Or it doesn't remind them and they hate it, making them shallow and callous.
Overwhelmed as one would be, placed in my position.
Such a heavy burden now to be "The One".
Born to bear and read to all the details of our ending
To write it down for all the world to see.
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Posted 05 April 2007 - 01:03 PM

Yeah. Quite nice.
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